Text as a Visual Medium

The concept of my text piece is to show my distance from nature by incorporated words and pictures and creating distance. The feedback and suggestions that I got from my group was that I should draw nature from a window view to display my distance from nature and that my old idea made my picture seem as if I wanted the world to end and I hated life which is understandable considering the fact that the word despise and the world on fire somewhat sends that message. They also said that instead of the word despise I should use the word distance which was a great suggestion.