Showing posts with label feedback. Show all posts
Showing posts with label feedback. Show all posts

Sunday, October 17, 2010

What if.....? Idea and Feedback

The concept behind my What if ......? project was to try and replicate a scene from the movie I am Legend so that I could convey the message of what if we used up our resources to the point that there was none left and we had to abandon our planet? The feedback that I got from my group was that it was a good idea and that if I had any trouble drawing all of the cars that I should incorporate some kind of a collage but I didn't do that because it was a pencil drawing.

Text as a Visual Medium

The concept behind my text project was to try and convey the idea of distance from nature through my art and I planned on using some of the text techniques that we were shown in class such as proportion and shading. The feedback that I got from my group was that I should continue with that idea because the idea that I planned on using prior to my new idea didn't send the message I was trying to send.

Monday, September 20, 2010

Text as a Visual Medium

The concept of my text piece is to show my distance from nature by incorporated words and pictures and creating distance. The feedback and suggestions that I got from my group was that I should draw nature from a window view to display my distance from nature and that my old idea made my picture seem as if I wanted the world to end and I hated life which is understandable considering the fact that the word despise and the world on fire somewhat sends that message. They also said that instead of the word despise I should use the word distance which was a great suggestion.